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Thursday, April 18, 2013

Opening Scene

This is the opening scene to a story I've been working on more recently. Have to work out more of the world itself before I move forward, but I decided to write a little teaser.


My eyes opened to the vast expanse of space, the stars sparkling like jewels in the darkness. The ship turned to yield a view of the red planet. We had made it, and the journey was half over. We continued past Mars and on past its moons, within an hour arriving at our destination.
    The hypergate lay before us. It stretched two and a half miles across; a small distance in space, but quite large in comparison to our ship. “Gate activation in 3....2....1....”” a voice crackled over the intercom. I had only dreamed of this moment.
    A bright beam of energy flew past us, striking the side of the gate. The energy arced and crawled around the metal ring, connecting on the opposite side after just a few moments. “This is it...” I whispered to myself. The energy began to fill the empty space, and as as it connected an explosion of color and light was sent out from the center. A chill shot through my spine. Two hundred years of development and here it stood, humanities greatest achievement. But I was leaving most of humanity behind now. Earth was at my back, and unknown worlds lay ahead. I closed my eyes as the ships stasis cells were activated again, dreaming of the moment when we arrived.
    My name is John Kiersin, and this is my story.